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Falling |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Falling gather me like fallen leaves how I shy away from trees come and feel me bunch and pile tenderly walk through me awhile stay with me we can sit and roll touch has a way to console we somersault upon the grass breezing through play this game won’t last soon I will be a different fallen song sung changed to tickle you as snowflake upon your tongue I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen...I love the way this tumbled down the page.. from fall leaves to winter snowflakes. Lovely...simply lovely. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Enchanting! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love how your wonderful words metamorphosize, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, this touched my heart like the kiss of a snowflake, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - leaves to gather, walks to take. A gathering of thoughts... BC |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
 AWESOME!! BRAVO!! I LOVE fall and you write it so well...Peace,love, and happiness Tammy |
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