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0 posted 2002-10-02 01:54 PM



  I was teetering
   on the brink
     of forgetfulness
       Until you swept me
          off my feet
              and
               I was kidnapped
                   by love's recall.
                          ~~~
                                      
                                         Chris B.
                                           2001
                                         ~~~~~~~
                                        
                                          


© Copyright 2002 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-02 02:11 PM


Chris, many times fewer words are better...
this being one of those times.
Very very nicely said.
Be well...miss you...love ya, Teed.

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2002-10-02 02:27 PM


NancyLee - thankyou for signing and oh, for just being there, and being you. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-10-02 02:27 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may loves happiness always hold you as hostage to destiny! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-02 02:29 PM


Awww...there you are sweet Noah. Lifting up my spirits once again. Thankyou. hugs!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-10-02 02:35 PM


I must echo enchantress' comments...a concise expression of feelings...condensed and powerfully conveyed...

...second star on the right and straight on til morning...

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6 posted 2002-10-02 02:57 PM


Scorpio - thankyou for your comments. I see by your signature that you know the way to Never Never Land!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-10-02 03:08 PM


I find that it's easier to just fall in.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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8 posted 2002-10-02 03:33 PM


M.Romeo - lol.  Hope you have something soft to land upon. lol. Thanks

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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