Open Poetry #22 |
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Sleeping Late |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
I've slept late before.. Love came with morning break played shadows on the wall, the first dance of sun today. With eyelids closed tight, I missed the light love then slipped away. Without alarm of heart, within dream I couldn't feel, lost the chance for romance lost was my hope of real. Therefore tomorrow with the dawn eyes open wide and upon I intend to feel suns warm embrace upon my face. May destiny at least afford me this. Though I've slept late before... WhiteRose |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent! ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, I understand this feeling all too well, sweet friend, sometimes I just wish I could stay in bed just so I can dream of my Joanna longer! (sigh) I wish nothing but loves true happiness for you always, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"without alarm of heart" --interesting way of putting it! Enjoyed this poem--as I do all of yours! Have a great day! EA |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Rosie... I was all full of bratty comments as I opened it, for these days, I'd give just about anything to sleep late... for reasons of lungs, not of heart. *S* But I'll gladly yield any and all smirks to sincere appreciation. *S* |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
"tomorrow with the dawn eyes open wide and upon I intend to feel suns warm embrace upon my face" clear imagery, reads beautifully! love it Sammie |
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