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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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0 posted 2002-09-22 01:12 AM


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Dainty ballerina, when you closed your eyes to rest,
did angels call you into dreams to see your Father’s best?
Playful winds around you must have held your little hand,
and led you down a moon-kissed path to-ward the promised land.

Tenderhearted sweetheart, when God beckoned from the sky,
did His deep love encompass you just ‘fore you learned to fly?
Wind-chime-laughing daughter, did you feel yourself arise -
when God our Heav’nly Father came to call you to the skies?

Effervescent sparkle in your eyes of piercing blue.
Those kisses of the butterfly, a gift to me, from you.
Sleigh-bell-giggle darling, yes I saw you on the wing -
the sweetest pressure of your arms, were wrapped around our King.

My precious loving daughter, skipping toward your heav’nly crown -
did your bright eyes peek back at me just ‘fore the mist came down?

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The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-09-22 01:41 AM


Rosemary,
What a tender and inspiring write! Thank you for that.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Martie
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2 posted 2002-09-22 11:22 AM


Rosemary

So beautiful the memory of this child in poetry. So good to see you here...I've missed your wisdom of words.  

Tim
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3 posted 2002-09-22 11:37 AM


poignant and heartfelt as is your norm.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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4 posted 2002-09-22 07:33 PM


Thank you so much, Larry C, Martie and Tim - it's so amazing to visit here again - and see how enormous it has become!  I deeply appreciate your words!



Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-09-23 09:51 PM


Rosemary~
How I've missed you~

This is beautiful as is ALL your heartfelt writes~
A lovely and touching tribute to Misty's memory~
You're beautiful~
Yes, we've grown ...
but it's always nice to hold hands with old friends~

Hi Lucky !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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6 posted 2002-09-27 12:56 PM


Oh, Marge - you are so dear!  Thank you!
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7 posted 2002-09-27 02:40 AM


I felt the sweetness and tenderness of these words in my mind and heart.  What a lovely way to remember your daughter through this wonderful poetry that you share.  I too am very glad to see you writing.

Howdy Neighbour
     
Sharon  

MiniGuitarMan
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8 posted 2002-10-01 02:12 PM


Marge told me I would enjoy what you write.
She was right again.
The page opened up and showed me your heart.
Bill

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2002-10-01 05:49 PM


Rosemary..what a pleasure to have you back at the blues again. I too am overwhelmed by the enormousness of this site when I visit anymore. It was great to read you again, you always strike such a cord within my heart.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-10-01 07:19 PM


Rosemary,
Welcome back. Tenderness in excellence.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2002-10-01 07:38 PM


I love you softly spoken words..
It is a treat to read you here again...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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12 posted 2002-10-01 11:25 PM


I must admit made me cry...I don't know what to say Im sorry my words fail me..

Consider yourself fuzzed

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-10-01 11:28 PM


Rosemary - this has to be one of the most tender writings I've ever read. Very touching it is...

BC

Beki
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14 posted 2002-10-02 01:25 AM


Rosemary, I too am dropping in after a very long absence and am delighted to find you (and your picture) here! I had forgotten  that this is where I knew your name from before.

Your poem is a sweet, loving tribute...a wonderful way to remember your misty...thanks for sharing

doreen peri
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15 posted 2002-10-02 07:26 AM


a well composed sonnet
so sad the subject yet so beautifully  phrased

nice to see you rosemary

((hugs))to you

BloomingRose
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16 posted 2002-10-02 07:30 AM


Beautifully written.

Deb

Samantha G Kennedy
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Kent England
17 posted 2002-10-03 03:14 AM


The essence behind your words, soars in this beautiful piece.

Captivating, with non forced rhyming~ every description is placed perfectly

I adore this piece !

Sammie

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