Open Poetry #22 |
Misty's Journey |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
. . . Dainty ballerina, when you closed your eyes to rest, did angels call you into dreams to see your Father’s best? Playful winds around you must have held your little hand, and led you down a moon-kissed path to-ward the promised land. Tenderhearted sweetheart, when God beckoned from the sky, did His deep love encompass you just ‘fore you learned to fly? Wind-chime-laughing daughter, did you feel yourself arise - when God our Heav’nly Father came to call you to the skies? Effervescent sparkle in your eyes of piercing blue. Those kisses of the butterfly, a gift to me, from you. Sleigh-bell-giggle darling, yes I saw you on the wing - the sweetest pressure of your arms, were wrapped around our King. My precious loving daughter, skipping toward your heav’nly crown - did your bright eyes peek back at me just ‘fore the mist came down? . . . . The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (09-22-2002 01:25 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Rosemary, What a tender and inspiring write! Thank you for that. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary So beautiful the memory of this child in poetry. So good to see you here...I've missed your wisdom of words. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
poignant and heartfelt as is your norm. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Thank you so much, Larry C, Martie and Tim - it's so amazing to visit here again - and see how enormous it has become! I deeply appreciate your words! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ How I've missed you~ This is beautiful as is ALL your heartfelt writes~ A lovely and touching tribute to Misty's memory~ You're beautiful~ Yes, we've grown ... but it's always nice to hold hands with old friends~ Hi Lucky ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Marge - you are so dear! Thank you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I felt the sweetness and tenderness of these words in my mind and heart. What a lovely way to remember your daughter through this wonderful poetry that you share. I too am very glad to see you writing. Howdy Neighbour |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
Marge told me I would enjoy what you write. She was right again. The page opened up and showed me your heart. Bill |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Rosemary..what a pleasure to have you back at the blues again. I too am overwhelmed by the enormousness of this site when I visit anymore. It was great to read you again, you always strike such a cord within my heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosemary, Welcome back. Tenderness in excellence. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love you softly spoken words.. It is a treat to read you here again... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
I must admit made me cry...I don't know what to say Im sorry my words fail me.. Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosemary - this has to be one of the most tender writings I've ever read. Very touching it is... BC |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Rosemary, I too am dropping in after a very long absence and am delighted to find you (and your picture) here! I had forgotten that this is where I knew your name from before. Your poem is a sweet, loving tribute...a wonderful way to remember your misty...thanks for sharing |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
a well composed sonnet so sad the subject yet so beautifully phrased nice to see you rosemary ((hugs))to you |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautifully written. Deb |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
The essence behind your words, soars in this beautiful piece. Captivating, with non forced rhyming~ every description is placed perfectly I adore this piece ! Sammie |
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