Open Poetry #22 |
Your Kiss |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Your Kiss in all the pleasures of this world that exist the most sensual thing about you is your kiss it is soft as a single hair the whispered echo of a silent prayer the sound surrounds in tender ring in notes of wind that leaves sing I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
As always I love your poems.. Nice written... So sensitive feelings.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A kiss can tell all. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful description of the pleasure of a kiss. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Helen, this is lovely... as gentle as a first kiss. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
This is very nice, Helen, it could be a love song. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) May loves kiss always bring a warm afterglow to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
I love how you write about a love in this way... in my case i usually write of a love that dosn't exsist.. Great write! My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helen, A gentle lovely, enjoyed. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
~sigh~ this is sooooo nicely put your pen is like an artist's brush thanks, Lady |
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