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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-10-02 04:06 AM

my kisses
on your weariness
manic children
rapid eye
wet warm lips
upon your lids
as-I-am--You-am-I

fingernails
drift in the hair
as I in wonder watch you sleep.
I wonder what you have in mind.
My kiss goodnight.
I pray: "dream sweet."

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-02-2002 04:07 AM).]

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

1 posted 2002-10-02 09:02 AM

In watchful sleep do we share dreams, and in sleepful watching do we know them.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-02 09:20 AM

I love this serene one...
really nice feeling as you read the words.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-10-02 09:26 AM

Oh, I liked this one...very sensual. ThisDiamond

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2002-10-02 04:05 PM

This is very pretty.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2002-10-02 04:09 PM

watching a lover sleep is a true act of devotion...providing protection and security...nicely written

...believe what your heart feels.....

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-10-02 06:27 PM

this is different for you but a pleasure to read the softness of your words

M

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-10-02 08:07 PM

Serenity,
As soft as a gentle breeze, enjoyed.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2002-10-02 09:02 PM

K, I love the flow of this, how it rises and falls like a sleeping lover's breath.
Wonderful words.

El riesgo vive siempre!

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

9 posted 2002-10-02 09:37 PM

Very nice. I will "dream sweet" tonight.

Tom

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

10 posted 2002-10-02 11:17 PM

how did I miss this?
well
I have it now

and for every night

you mint
the gold
of
dream's
tender

just a person

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-10-03 03:46 PM

Ah, a symbol of domestic tranquility?
Or ...
a goddess watching over?
(that I-am-you, you-am-me
was quite Yahwehish,
donch'a agree?)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2002-10-03 11:04 PM

serenity is so elusive
that I claimed the name for mine--
like silence after a hard rain--
eternal is not measured time.

Thank you...you...

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