Open Poetry #22 |
Spilling |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Spilling to feel a thought then make it real the glass of life tipped to spill drops in gather course ahead it’s liquid runs to flow and spread tumble, splatter pour smooth move release has altered I do approve I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I loved the flow of this! Great write! |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Too often I’m spilling Not just a cold bottle of beer, but that too. With emotions, they just want to spill out when it’s just not the right time. This poem makes me think about that, I got to learn to keep the young lass from knocking over my glass. Like this bunches |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
This does flow like "drops in gather course ahead". As usual, nice poem. Tom |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, you always spill your heart out so beautifully in poetry, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice sounds combinations that add to the images... as usual I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Well done, enjoyed. |
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