Open Poetry #22 |
Songlight |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
..old ghosts play in the darkened fields, among the steetlights, silhouetted moonlight upon fallen rain, in silent, fleeting etchings of undying immortal romance angels drift upon the wind, whispering truth of lost revelation, the trees rapture in twilight song. in the sea of How It Happened, theres a hallway gliding in all manner of conceivable entirety nestled in a quiet peaceful location, ... pulsing sandgrain embers of love in the endless wild sky... dust in the empty space between unseen drifting among larger immediate action yet the ghosts still hang in the fog, old gray coats draped between the trees. aimless. we search for the lost revelation, from person to person, from age to age, as long as memories last, we will not forget the sacrifices we have made. an angel peeks her face... truth to truth there is no single truth as the truth of her beauty. the promise in her face |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
ES, Some interesting thoughts you provoke here. Nicely done. (I think you want to correct this typo: among the steetlights,) If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
yes, this is definitely under-rated superiority. i'm not going to pull it apart, but like, it flows very well , (ambience, and use of language to convey meaning). top quality! and you say i'm better than YOU. whatever! |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
and.. this is really emotional. and beautiful. and that's something far beyond language. so there. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very tender...lovely emotion ES...enjoyed reading you.... Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
EagleScorpion - yes, I find truth in beauty. Excellent write... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another excellent write. Especially liked the gray coates between the trees...really nice presentation. ThisDiamond |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
im very glad you enjoyed this.. |
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