Open Poetry #22 |
Everglades Inferno |
Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
By the flickering flame sits the Seminole Indian With the sad of face but the strong of heart As the crocodile's scales and the pelican's pinions In the gloom and the glow of the smoke depart. As the Bayous glow and the glades go gleaming beneath heaven's heat and its raging song while withering winds set them rolling All day long. Now the treetops sway with his sorrowful singing with soulful cries die the cringing leaves. And tree trunks whimper beneath the purging And the flowers can no longer the flames deceive. And the green grown grass that sung in the sunlight Is it not now knowing what the sun then meant When its glimmer galore once promised the moonlight heaven sent? So he sings in the heat with his smoldering arrows Which he twangs to the tune of the sycamore's fright. And the crocodile flees with his scaly brow furrowed And the frogs once free don't croak in the night And the black bear turns toward a better horizon Where the whimpering willow doesn't wail in the glade Where the blaze blows not with a sickening ardor In the shade. Where the moccasin, queen of the creeping and crawling, Doesn't flee while frightened at the flames that fly Whipping the waves where she once lay soaking The red and the white of her reptile eyes. Where the hummingbird kisses the blossoming flowers With their petals primed for his piercing beak And the everglades do not glow nor glower week on week. With the last feeble breathe of his smoldering body The Seminole sings of a sorrow once wrought. Soul of the plains and buffaloes plodding Was their plodding the centuries not for naught? And the trickle of blood that caressess his temples Is it not the tears of a buffaloes heart? Is it not the sorrow of a grieving grassland ripped apart? Now the pumas growl and the whippoorwills whimper At the seething sky turned bright coal red Was death by predator not much simpler? By the python's hiss or the viper's breathe? And the trees say naught for they say naught always While the Seminole sits in their silence entombed As the everglades burn and its waters keep boiling Beneath the moon. [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-02-2002 12:46 AM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is dramatic and sad and scary all at once. I enjoyed it. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
This is beautiful Rad, it just flowed with so much emotion, left me sad. I can see how deep your feelings go when I read this poem and yet you can write so well with a light heart too. Is this a new one or did you finally find all your poems that you had packed away? Whatever the case, this was lovely. caterina |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thank you both for your encouraging responses. Hi Caterina! I wrote this poem approximately 15 years ago. The Florida Everglades had somehow caught fire. Firefighters were having great difficulties bringing it under control. The native Americans there had to flee and there was much concern about the effects on both flora and fauna. Arson was suspected. No Caterina, I haven't found them all. But I did find some that my mom had stashed away in a closet. This is one that was included in that collection. Thanks again for the feedback my friends! Glad you enjoyed! [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-02-2002 01:14 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A story beautiful told in poetry. I love it! definitely one to save... *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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