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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-10-01 11:45 PM

The Moon, a Sapphire in salient shine

(Je suis ici, si tu peux me trouver)
Draw nearer, I want to know you

The Sky, an ether of Opal, in turbulent swirl

(Viens ici, je voudrais te voir.)
I sing of pain, can you soothe me?

The Sea, liquid Onyx, shot through with Silver

(Passe par ici, j’ai envie de te toucher)
I sing of doubt, reassure me

The Beach, Gold dust glitter and Diamond scatter

(Coule le temps avec moi, je veux t’aimer)
My song is yearning, come fulfill me

(Je suis ici, si tu peux me trouver)

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

[This message has been edited by wranx (10-01-2002 11:46 PM).]

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

1 posted 2002-10-01 11:48 PM

*jaw drops to the floor, quickly picks it up and exits the room*

Consider yourself fuzzed

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-10-01 11:51 PM

truly beautiful

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

3 posted 2002-10-02 12:05 PM

Oh my... my....ED this is sooooo beautiful!!!
And you know I love it....Gosh my jaw hit the floor also...WOW! What a POET you are...BEAUTIFUL!

Amore
H.

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-10-02 12:11 PM

wranx

The kind of jewels that move me...here in your words. Beautiful!

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2002-10-02 01:30 AM

beautiful beautiful poem I have been studying french for almost two year sbut have yet to attempt a poem in that language - I am in awe

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-10-02 02:29 AM

smiling...I'm afraid my reaction to this cannot match, shall we say,

"la lubricación pura de la necesidad undying del amor de ser"

Yeah...let's say that.

Even if the French hate American accents.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

7 posted 2002-10-02 03:22 AM

holy........
whew
speechless
but--
truly
the finest thing
I have seen of yours
this should be wrapped
in pride
my friend

wow
b

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

8 posted 2002-10-02 01:00 PM

Francais, oui Monsieur.

Merci.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

caterina
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 188
Canada

9 posted 2002-10-02 01:20 PM

Tres, tres bien! I can't believe that you have never written, you must be joking because I have read other poems of yours and you do it so well. I don't think it's a passing thing now, it's in your blood like everyone else. Once you start, you can't stop.

This was beautiful!

caterina

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2002-10-02 01:38 PM

bravo! well woven into more than just the words meanings...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2002-10-02 01:55 PM

I am here, if you can find me!

~ My halo's off to you! ~

EA

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