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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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0 posted 2002-10-01 10:56 PM


    
Thoughts trimmed in gold
Memories captured
Within the moon's celestial threads
Beneath the setting of my soul
I curtsey before the pain
Behold My Muse
She has the power
To unlock
The box so well known
Perhaps you've heard of him
"Pandora"
I gave M'Lady
This beautiful creature
Before me
The key
So the world could see
Beneath my dreams
That smirk upon her face
Full of mischief
Fueled by my own grief
Of things
I'm too stubborn to let go
She knows me all too well
Intimate many occassions
Pen and paper filled
Front to back
As I would lie fast asleep
In the comfort of my bed
Meandering through corridors of time
As she navigates through my heart,body,spirit,soul and mind
I curtsey before the pain
Behold My Muse...




Consider yourself fuzzed

[This message has been edited by FuzzyFrazzledFraggle (10-01-2002 11:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-01 10:59 PM


"So the world could see
Beneath my dreams
That smirk upon her face
Full of mischief
Fueled by my own grief
Of things
I'm too stubborn to let go
She knows me all too well"


great picture to go with this poem, and this part here, is my favorite

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-10-01 11:09 PM


FuzzyFrazzledFraggle - your muse is well this starry night. Excellent write, I must see more...

BC

Martie
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3 posted 2002-10-01 11:19 PM


FFF

This is wonderful...very much enjoyed you and your muse!

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4 posted 2002-10-01 11:33 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, the picture is so gorgeous as you are truly are the poetic Tinkerbell who brings gliter to poetry! (sigh) May your muse always enchant you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
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5 posted 2002-10-02 12:13 PM


Yes, yes, that's exactly what a muse will do.
A very good interpretation of the thing we love to hate.


~wranx

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-02 10:25 PM


Sorry I missed this before, but as they say, better late than never! Anyway, this works out better, because now it will pop up to the top and hopefully get more readings! We all can identify with a capricious muse! Very well done FFF!

~ Give her some spice and everything nice! ~

EA

brian madden
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7 posted 2002-10-02 10:27 PM


it seems that you are listening to your muse after all. enjoyed the read.

El riesgo vive siempre!

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