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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
From Where How are we to know who will come and go From where have we come and where have we been How much did we grow From where did we begin Do you know the answers Do you think you have a clue When this body lays to rest and your spirit finds one new Will you remember all the lessons and the teachings you've been through So, come the time you look at me and think it's de ja vu Perhaps your looking in my eyes and really seeing you.. c2002SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-03-2002 11:23 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh yes, this is so fantastic, the flow and the thoughts!!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And how very true this could be! Enjoyed the read..love the subject matter. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so beautiful but felt kind of sad to me, sweet friend, this felt to me like a poem where someone loved another so much but the other didn't love in return and a lovelorn expression was felt seeing oneself in the others reflection! (sigh) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet firend, your words are always a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love how this reads, Electra... especially the little jolt at the end  ~ neighborly chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just love this!---and you know why! You have a written a wonderful poem on reincarnation! ~ 'Til we meet again!...and again and again...~ EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
SimplyGold, I agree with everyone else,....this is very well written. Very beautiful, but with a hint of sadness. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. With Love To All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-09-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - if I were to look into your eyes I would see simply gold... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Dear Hearts, Sea, Enchantress, Earth Angel, Noah, Madame C., Garysgirl and Bill. Thank you for connecting. Your comments to me are pilars of support, you have no idea. I am living on your poems and at the moment suriving from your connected wisdom. I don't know if you look back at the responses given to your replies but, if you do and read this, please know that you make a difference and I am grateful. Much love, SG P.S. Bill, you have looked into my eyes and alas, you have touched me for the mirror speaks to itself. [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-11-2002 12:29 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
So, come the time you look at me and think it's de ja vu Perhaps your looking in my eyes and really seeing you. Very cool write, SG. So, would that be two of me or two of you? |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Duncan, Very good, that's a definate twist. Got me pondering that one! Thanks SG |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Do you know the answers Do you think you have a clue So, come the time you look at me and think it's de ja vu My! My! My! The grace of your prose leaves me totally speechless! [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-13-2002 12:50 AM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Rad, After reading your critique of "The Edge" and "Peace". I'm not sure if you are being (facious - spelling?) serious or not. Yes, I admit I'm a little insecure after having seen your wonderful suggestions to my amateur poetry, forgive me for asking, as I admire you and what you say does have impact on me. Respectfully, SG |
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