One Moment... that's all I asked for

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Open Poetry #22

One Moment... that's all I asked for

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-10-01 09:02 PM

One Moment
~*~
One moment
that’s all I asked for.
Instead I got years,
that turned to fleeting memories.
Just like the love song
said it would,
the kiss, the eyes
became forever.
The curtains change,
but the blinding sun still stares
at the old rocking chair
that pounds the wooden floor.
It knows it’s tracks well,
and Like a child I clutch remembrance
to my breast,
singing an old love song
holding it close,
like a warm teddy bear.
One moment,
really, that’s all I asked for.

BloomingRose

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-10-01 10:33 PM

hauntingly beautiful and brings my own memories out (((hugs)))

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-01 10:39 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Debra, this is so very sad, sweet friend, yes, always hug those memories like a teddy bear and I hope now you have found a new true love song! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-10-01 10:49 PM

BloomingRose - I also can only express the haunting of this write. One moment, not a lot to ask for, not a lot....

BC

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2002-10-02 06:44 AM

Thank you, and hugs to all.
Deb

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