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Would It Be Ok To Say….I Love You
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Would It Be Ok To Say….I Love You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Would It Be Ok To Say….I Love You you were a blond haired tender tease I gladly gave you my heart with ease you gave me such love nowhere else I would ever know all the things in your heart you freely show always said what ever was on your mind gave without reservation my attention and most of my time you are the pages of a lifetime journal a light that flows through a dark eternal once gave me the gift of a robin’s egg perfume, pearls and things with legs and all the best I could ever be you are half of what is good in me you took my life and turned it around when I think I am lost I look at you and know I am found you took a life that could have been simple and quiet to a world that exploded to color and a happiness riot you are one of the best things that have touched this earth and I am blessed for I was the one chosen to give you birth Happy 21st Birthday Michael I love you …MOM [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (09-30-2002 07:58 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen What a wonderful poem! I wrote one like this for each of my sons...when they came to a certain point that I felt was grown up. This took me back to that time with its touching and tender message. There is nothing as special as a mother's love...unless, of course it's a sons. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - I send birthday greetings to Michael. Happy Birthday Michael... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is a beautiful birthday treasure for you son Helen. HAPPY BIRTHDAY MICHAEL!! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
H, I think you have wished Michael a wonderful birthday with this. Nicely expressed. Thanks, "Mom". E |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
mommy tears.... I am keeping this one mine will be 10 shortly.... (more mommy tears) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
more than okay...smiles you ARE a gentle heart, Helen. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You and Michael, we all wish him the happiest birthday as I know these beautiful words will always deeply touch his heart! (big hugggsssss) This is one of my favorites of yours, sweet friend, you have a true golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Said so perfectly, of course you write so well, Happy Birthday Michael Your Dad A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, 21! NO WAY!  You must have been a baby having a baby. Congratulations. You are a wonderful mother and you give such fine gifts. Well done...Mom. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very, very nice...James |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Well since this so well done by you helen, and figured since today is his birthday, I bump this up. Happy Birthday Again Son Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Lovely written.. Happy Birthday.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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