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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-01 02:09 PM



I felt caressed of season,
when stepped upon cement
of ordinary country porch.

For, in the repose of morn
my lips were kiss adorned.

Sweet, on lips with color
red, orange and gold.
Brown soft in hue,
kissed with delicate
autumnal dew.

The first taste of kiss
of fall, of bliss.
Before the blaze
of color show,
leading to
the winter's snow.

Where upon this same
step of cement,
kissed again
with cold lament,
will be the rose
who weathers thus
the changing
that the season does.
If always with a kiss upon
the seasons change
and then move on.

WhiteRose

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Irie
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1 posted 2002-10-01 06:57 PM


Beautiful WR!

~Sheri

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Swim out to it"

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just out of reach
2 posted 2002-10-01 07:00 PM


WhiteRose - you have painted a lovely picture of autumn here. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-10-01 07:10 PM


WhiteRose
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Magician
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since 2002-08-14
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4 posted 2002-10-02 09:33 AM


This is such beautiful poetry.
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