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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-01 03:54 AM


Soft Place
In My Heart

As I look at your
picture I think of
what could have been
and what still could be
should you decide
to return to me.

For I have a soft place
in my heart for you.
My heart is broken now
but you could fix it
if the soft place in
your heart wanted too.

JamesLee
Sept30
2002

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1 posted 2002-10-01 11:55 AM


James, I like this one.....so sweet and heartfelt
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2 posted 2002-10-01 12:01 PM


I know the feeling of this poem all too well... Great poem James  :-)

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

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(smiles) And I know that soon your love will come and with her golden heart she will bring a flame of joy and comfort to you always and will always be the keeper of your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is sensitive and lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-01 05:09 PM


nice
Suetang
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5 posted 2002-10-01 06:15 PM


Hello James

This was wonderful and I hope your heart is repaired soon.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-10-01 06:58 PM


Very nice read. enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-10-01 07:13 PM


James,
Good thought, good write, good read.

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8 posted 2002-10-01 07:50 PM


Ahhh so sad James...good write!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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9 posted 2002-10-01 11:21 PM


James - softly is your write, like your heart...

BC

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