It should have been 3 years

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Open Poetry #22

It should have been 3 years

KillerLemurGirl
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-09-30 10:52 PM

Time seems to pass so quickly, like fresh, cold stream water under an aluminum canoe.
Summer leaves slowly changing and days growing shorter. So it will be that day...
It would have been three years.
Small kisses leading to a bath of flowers and a question haunt my thoughts.
Stolen kisses and acts of love near unaware friends.
It would have been three years.
Lonely nights dreaming of snowflake blue eyes and stronge arms far away.
Tears and sobs that were never answered.
It would have been three years.
Unsure dreams and expectations for tomorrow.
Denial of true feelings to try to save him...or maybe yourself
It was two years four months and six days
But it could have been three years

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-30 11:04 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is sooooooo powerfully heartwrenching, sweet friend, this is a heartfelt debut with so much sincerity and expression, you have come to the right place as we all share our feelings to one another and compassionately embrace tears with each other! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-10-01 12:57 PM

Welcome to Passions. A good write of lost love. You counted the days, did he?

fishop
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since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

3 posted 2002-10-01 01:18 AM

very nice write. I find myself jelous of such fresh emotions, even the sad ones like what you expressed here. Keep it fresh.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-10-01 04:10 AM

Enjoyed...James

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