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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-25 09:57 PM

I'm not within the echo.
Don't look for me on wing.
I'm not within the drift,
of sand upon the wind

Tangible I touch the flesh.
Soft caress of fingers real.
A brush upon your skin, a sigh.
Passion in the feel.

Not image placed in mind alone
a picture, yes, but more
a touch, poetic, of myself
as never felt before.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-25-2002 10:35 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-25 10:31 PM

Good write as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-25 10:56 PM

Wow! This is an exceptional little piece of writing! I think I'm going to go back and read it again but this time I am going to read it more slowly to totally grasp everything you're saying.

Linda

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

3 posted 2002-09-26 01:57 PM

I'm not within the echo.
Don't look for me on wing.
I'm not within the drift,
of sand upon the wind

This first verse captured me and pulled me in. And I enjoyed the rest as always.

Crysania
Member

since 2002-09-21

Posts 67
Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!)

4 posted 2002-09-26 02:13 PM

*nods* I like it, very much.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-09-26 07:26 PM

WhiteRose - and you are poetic, as this poem shows...

BC

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

6 posted 2002-09-26 08:09 PM

Gorgeous!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-09-26 08:10 PM

nice write

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-09-26 08:23 PM

Extremely beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-09-26 08:59 PM

Thank you all so very much. It was so nice to come in here and see so many responses. I feel like a slouch because I cannot respond in kind too often for I am still having problems with this site. Again, thank you all.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-09-26 09:26 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I am sorry you are still having problems getting in here but as always your beautiful words always spread sunshine ton these pages! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-09-26 10:50 PM

Hearts_Dance
Junior Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 31

12 posted 2002-10-01 12:42 PM

I have read so much good poetry here, I am affraid to put any of my poems here. White Rose, I really like how you wrote of yourself.

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