Open Poetry #22 |
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Foolish..... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
Take back the vision Of your smile from my eyes I wish my heart weren’t so foolish I wish I could disguise Instead I wear it plainly All this love, so clear And every time, you walk away But I just want you near I wrote these words in whisper A hushed breath of plea Simple anguish in wanting (Wanting you with me) Still there are no words in meter No rise and fall of rhyme will do And even though you know better I cry, “I’m not in love with you” ~SEA~ |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, All right. What's going on here? I need some hard core romantic poetry. I'm starving! ![]() Not that this isn't good...it's just, well you know... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lol...too sad?? ok...ok.... ![]() |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I wrote these words in whisper A hushed breath of plea Simple anguish in wanting (Wanting you with me) Sadly perfect, as only you write of lost love. Did I mention I'm glad you're back? [This message has been edited by Duncan (09-30-2002 12:26 AM).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Very well done. Thank you for the last 2 replies. You are the best. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So good to see the name SEA back here. Susan, you have been missed. Some of these readers have been going through LOVE poetry withdrawal symptoms...calling Dr. SEA? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Foolish? ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Susan, this is so very sad, sweet friend, it too saddens me when one loves someone so very much but the other wishes not to and the other is too scared to lose it so can't help but try and hold on! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
But I love ya? What else does one need when they have a Toerag? |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Beautifully expressed my dear, hope everything is ok with you... I love your words none-the-less {{{{HUGZ}}}} Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA, I like it sad and true. |
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Hearts_Dance Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31 |
Oh, but what a lie? Only when I want to bury my feelings will I lie to myself. So very sad. I hope things look up for you soon. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You write of sadness well, Susan. *hugs* ![]() |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This cry speaks to the heart and soul of loss. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So sad yet beautiful Sue. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, wonderful to see you ![]() even if the words are sad, they came from your heart and this is so beautiful and touching! take care sweetie. amy ![]() "if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :) |
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