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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-09-30 12:03 PM

Take back the vision
Of your smile from my eyes
I wish my heart weren’t so foolish
I wish I could disguise

Instead I wear it plainly
All this love, so clear
And every time, you walk away
But I just want you near

I wrote these words in whisper
A hushed breath of plea
Simple anguish in wanting
(Wanting you with me)

Still there are no words in meter
No rise and fall of rhyme will do
And even though you know better
I cry, “I’m not in love with you”

~SEA~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-09-30 12:09 PM

Susan,
All right. What's going on here? I need some hard core romantic poetry. I'm starving!

Not that this isn't good...it's just, well you know...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-09-30 12:11 PM

lol...too sad?? ok...ok....

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-09-30 12:23 PM

I wrote these words in whisper
A hushed breath of plea
Simple anguish in wanting
(Wanting you with me)

Sadly perfect, as only you write of lost love. Did I mention I'm glad you're back?

[This message has been edited by Duncan (09-30-2002 12:26 AM).]

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2002-09-30 01:28 AM

Very well done. Thank you for the last 2 replies. You are the best.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-09-30 06:44 AM

So good to see the name SEA back here.

Susan, you have been missed. Some of these readers have been going through LOVE poetry withdrawal symptoms...calling Dr. SEA?

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-09-30 07:33 AM

Foolish?

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-30 08:14 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Susan, this is so very sad, sweet friend, it too saddens me when one loves someone so very much but the other wishes not to and the other is too scared to lose it so can't help but try and hold on! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

8 posted 2002-09-30 08:16 AM

But I love ya? What else does one need when they have a Toerag?

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

9 posted 2002-09-30 01:50 PM

Beautifully expressed my dear, hope everything is ok with you... I love your words none-the-less {{{{HUGZ}}}}

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-09-30 01:59 PM

SEA,
I like it sad
and true.

Hearts_Dance
Junior Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 31

11 posted 2002-09-30 02:22 PM

Oh, but what a lie?
Only when I want to bury my feelings will I lie to myself.
So very sad. I hope things look up for you soon.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2002-09-30 03:09 PM

You write of sadness well, Susan. *hugs*

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

13 posted 2002-09-30 04:00 PM

This cry speaks to the heart and soul of loss.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2002-09-30 04:40 PM

So sad yet beautiful Sue.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

15 posted 2002-09-30 08:20 PM

susan,
wonderful to see you

even if the words are sad, they
came from your heart and this is
so beautiful and touching! take care
sweetie.

amy

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

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