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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-09-29 10:48 PM

In the heartbeat of a moment draws the breath of here and now
Would it be in every tremble called away again some how?
For there lay before the fire in my arms held soft and sure
All I’ve known as pure desire ebbing high without a cure

In the calling of the future dawns the new and sultry sun
Would it be in soothing suture, reminiscence never done?
For there stays, as all about you, within me to be complete
All I’ve seen as good without you, captured once in soft repeat

In the falling of forever drives the mystic cloaks to black
Would it be of wheat and heather, in the meadow fading back?
For there is but one love only, fond and fragile as it may
All I’ve known of time so lonely, where my heart in waiting lay

Copyright Kkh 9/29/02

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2002-09-29 11:29 PM

*sighing*
*bumping*

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-09-29 11:55 PM

this is gorgeous poetry

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-09-30 02:38 PM

Wow! This is just beautiful.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-30 02:40 PM

(sigh) Oh Kathleen, this is soooooo gorgeous but also felt sad to me, sweet friend, I hope now love has found your heart and spreads rainbows across your blanketed dreams of wheat and barley! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

5 posted 2002-09-30 02:45 PM

ThisDiamond,

This flows with beauty and a hint of sorrow.
Excellent expression of feelings. You've painted a picture that I could feel.

I adore it!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

[This message has been edited by Irie (09-30-2002 02:47 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-09-30 02:54 PM

ThisDiamond

So soft in flow, touching and graceful...a beautiful write.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-09-30 03:01 PM

Very lovely!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2002-09-30 03:13 PM

You have so many incredibly poetic lines in this beautiful poem! Truly lovely!

~ Your words reflect the beauty of your soul~

Linda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-09-30 03:43 PM

Simply Fantabulous.....yepper....it tis,

Beautiful flow and rhyme, and the message
blends so well too....very well done....

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2002-09-30 04:07 PM

Thank you kindly fellow poets...as always my writing reflects the great inspiration and teachings of all of you. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-09-30 05:37 PM

Incredible write!
I admire your style and grace.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

12 posted 2002-09-30 05:48 PM

This is a poem to be hold. You are an inspiration, so very beautiful.

SimplyGold

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