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Open Poetry #22
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0 posted 2002-09-29 06:25 AM


I've held
that
sword
in my hands.

The blade
the steel
the chill
the oblivion.

It burns.
© Copyright 2002 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-29 06:26 AM

Chuckling to myself as I read this and can interpret it as a guideline breaker.  Don't worry, no self harm involved here.  
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2 posted 2002-09-29 08:23 AM

actually, I see this so layered it could break SEVERAL guidelines. chuckling, but it don't.

I love an open metaphor dahling!
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3 posted 2002-09-29 12:43 PM

yep, can read this one several ways
nicely done
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4 posted 2002-09-30 12:02 PM

MI...so good to see you...enjoyed this as always...
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