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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“RELEASING THOUGHTS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Gardens grow in the sand as I look out over the calmness of ocean waves feeling salty mist upon my face… Clouds of white are not to be found in the blueness of above, it is the color of your eyes I seek to gaze… Gulls fly singing, and as I search the sands, only peacefulness is what I see… As sun sets on the horizon, the sky is aflame in time, as it is, as it will be, yet breezes warm flow into my being releasing thoughts kept within… A place found inside discovered, within reach… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, I truly believe love can always paint a fresco in ones eye and the blue eyes seem so much more like sapphires and the clouds like marshmallows! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all loe you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill, I have watched your writing over this past 10 months or so....and I see a new man coming into our midst... a nice view, I might add.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill "A place found inside discovered, within reach…" Always a good place to search and find. Enjoyed this, my friend...and I have to agree with Barry. |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
enjoyed The man of few words... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Simply put and simply lovely. Linda |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill Your words left me with a feeling of peace and serenity, absolutely beautiful. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gentle as always Bill - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...Very nice smooth poem. I love to watch sunsets on the beach as the sun dips down beyond the horizon...Paul |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so lovely |
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