Open Poetry #22 |
Pardon |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Pardon a timid prisoner of emotions locked behind a wall of strength shackled to real illusions and the only escape is pardon’s freedom in breath I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sometimes it's enough. Enjoyed |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
Wow, great poem, full of intensity, yet simple too. Thanks for sharing |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Pardon me Miss? I like this the image and subject blend to what your really saying in the writing Thomas |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Helen, this is so very true and I wish every time it could be that easy, though sometimes for a response there is always that "I beg your pardon!" (sigh) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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