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Open Poetry #22

Pardon

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-28 12:50 PM

Pardon

a timid prisoner
of emotions
locked behind
a wall of strength
shackled to
real illusions
and
the only escape
is pardon’s
freedom
in breath

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-09-28 12:59 PM

Sometimes it's enough. Enjoyed

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

2 posted 2002-09-30 10:09 AM

Wow, great poem, full of intensity, yet simple too. Thanks for sharing

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2002-09-30 01:55 PM

Pardon me Miss?
I like this the image and subject blend to what your really saying in the writing
Thomas

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-30 02:15 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, this is so very true and I wish every time it could be that easy, though sometimes for a response there is always that "I beg your pardon!" (sigh) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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