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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2002-10-03 01:08 AM

Fade

I miss you seconds
after your sweet words
fade in my ear. My hearts
feels the pull of loneliness
in the silence that surround
me.I begin to wait for time
to tick tock its way by with
impatience and longing to feel
your words touch me and
your soul caress me bonding
us through the miles that
keep us so far apart.

LiviEden
New Member

since 2002-10-03

Posts 3
In the Mist

1 posted 2002-10-03 01:23 AM

A touch can travel many miles and still feel as warm as it did when it left. Nicely written!

The dance will never end, if it hasn't yet started.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2002-10-03 07:18 AM

Ah, the longing of missing someone special. You’ve captured it perfectly with this piece. So nice to see you back Tara.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-03 08:13 AM

(smiles) And I wish for loves whispers to come and swim in your heart from the disance away, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, I wish nothing but joy for you always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 08:14 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-10-03 01:04 PM

Tara

this is wonderful and so sad all at once, great to read you again!

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

5 posted 2002-10-03 02:17 PM

There are bonds that stretch beyond time with love.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

6 posted 2002-10-03 02:38 PM

there are some things, that just do not fade, ever...

I think I just read it

lovely!

Sammie

^i^

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-10-03 10:00 PM

rosepetals25 - how well I know of these words, how well...

BC

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-10-03 10:04 PM

Very sweet and romantic, Tara. I'm sure Dave will love it.

So glad to see you posting again.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-10-04 04:27 AM

Time to get on the freeway...James

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2002-10-04 04:25 PM

how beautiful penned, heartfelt piece.

(((hugs)))

Charisma

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-04 11:27 PM

Hi, Rosepetals (I love your user name). I know what you're talking about in your poem. My Gary and I spend a lot of time on the telephone, since we are not in the same town right now. I really look forward to our daily phone calls. I like the way you expressed yourself. Thanks for sharing.
Ethel....garysgirl

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

12 posted 2002-10-05 10:09 PM

LiviEden - Thank you for reading. Welcome to Passions, I hope you love it here as much as I do (even if I never get to visit as much as I want to)

Tracey - Much longing.. I miss my Dave ALL the time.. even when I talk to him.. because I know eventually we have to hang up. Thanks for stopping in

Noah - I'm glad you like it, and I sincerely appreciate your sweet words.

Susan - It's so good to see your name

I haven't spoken to you in forever! I will have to email you soon.  Thanks for reading.

Moonlight Romeo - Don't thank me, thank Dave.  He is my inspiration for everything that I do.  I'm glad you liked.

Samantha - What a kind response! Thank you

Bill - You and I both.. It's nice to know someone knows how I feel.

Michael - *Hugs* Thank you my friend

James - I work right next to an airport.. If you only knew how many of my daydreams consist of running from my desk and hopping on a plane...

Charisma _- *Hugs* right back to you. I hope you are doing well

Thank you for taking a look.

Ethel - It's hard isn't it? Again, its nice to know someone shares my feelings. I hope you and Gary get to reunite soon. Thank you for reading and responding.

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (10-05-2002 10:09 PM).]

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