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Magician
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0 posted 2002-09-27 03:36 PM


The sculpture takes form
Starting at the crown of her head
Down her face ever so soft
To the neck, fingers are led
Then shoulders around and down
The length of arms ‘til fingers interlace
Then back up carefully all the way
To slowly in outline trace
Examine in great detail
Every square, wonder-filled inch
With warm working hands
A caress here, pressure there, just a pinch
Down the chest continuing again
Extra attention on the back now
To shape and to form
To get it right somehow
Sliding down and around
The most tender of waist
Stopping for special work
On that most special place
The entire length of legs
Up and down once, then twice
Working with the right material
Makes the progress nice
The sculpture starts to take form
As the hands work the feet
A labor of love
Never to be complete

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1 posted 2002-09-27 03:52 PM




(smiles) Bravissimo!!! You have sculptured a David-esque masterpiece of a poem here, your words are always remarkable works of art chiseled to excellence, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-27 03:58 PM


Aha..I see you have been working your magic again..
Nice to see you posting once again.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-09-27 04:16 PM


Nicely sculpted, with tender caressing finger movements.  
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4 posted 2002-09-28 11:55 AM


*sighing* here..
loving this

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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