Open Poetry #22 |
Ode To Toe |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ODE TO TOE by Earth Angel ~~~~~~~ Oh, once upon a time, Across an azure sea There lived a princely rag, His name was Toe, you see. Each morning he would wrap himself, In rags of rich, fine linen, Half his day was as a saint, --the other half was sinnin'! Who is this man of witty charm, Whose horn is full of plenty, Methinks he is a mystery man, Whose thoughts I'd give a penny! ~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-27-2002 06:58 PM).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Earth Angel, I love this and will be watching for more. I think he likes to stir the pot. ME |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
No mystery about it... he's one of this world's very finest. *G* This is delightful, EA... Saint or sinner... or Bal's favorite pest One thing is clear... sweet Toe's the best! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ME--- I agree with you, Mother--- "I think he likes to stir the pot"!!! And as Martha Stewart often says...."and that's a good thing!" ~ May you send beautiful weather all around the world---you have the power! hehe ~ EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern-- Looks like you are definitely on the list of Toe's fans! Thank you for the "delightful" reply. It was easy to write this poem considering the subject matter! hehe Linda |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
So curious you are of Toe I see A mystery man of cheer Painting smiles upon our face Making fun of our friend ‘deer That’s his goal in life you know This I’ve recently learned Badgering words of play As poor ol’ ‘deer gets burned All good fun and silliness Back and forth they bout Toe & “deer go round and round Spreading laughter throughout ~Sheri |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
[This message has been edited by suthern (09-27-2002 04:43 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Irie--- That was a fantastic poem you just wrote. I love it---Toe will surely love it as well. That was so sweet of you to reply this way. ~ smiles to you this fine fall day ~ Linda |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There once was a man we called Toerag Whose quips got our Deer in a deep quag Sometimes Balladeer got him back They were evenly matched it's a fact Enter LongJhn the third scalawag!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nan Ah, now I've got it, there are THREE 'Muck'ateers! haha ~ Smiling right along with you! ~ Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Funny stuff here EA! Watch out cause that Toe will get you back! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Awwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, Toerag is definitely a mystery but delight to us all, I love it, he will love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress--- If I was going to write about Toe, I knew I had to make it "funny"! Thanx! Is it raining in your neck of the woods? It is here and I love it. A peaceful, reflective day---in between clients! Have a great day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah--- Is he a man of mystery?---or is he really the Man of La Mancha or the man-in-the-moon or a man-of-war or Suthern's main man or .......??? Hm! Don't know!---I guess he is indeed, a man of mystery afterall! hehe ~ smiles ~ Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-27-2002 02:13 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A saint?....Mystery man?.....Ya make me sound like an angelic James Bond?....LOL....Like I could be "lifted up by Angel's Wings"....thank you so much for the very sweet poem gal...you are a sweetie!!! And thank you all for the kind responses to this nice poem..... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A penny?.... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Irie...I truly love my bud Balladeer and LongJohn too....though he doesn't come play often anymore....and yes....if I can create at least a slight smile...I feel honored...thanks for the sweet write. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Linda, a truly entertaining piece!! I always enjoy reading your words!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe--- An "Angelic James Bond" you say?!?---I'm intrigued! tehe It was with trepidation that I posted this poem, but now that it appears to have met with your approval, and given all the wonderful responses it got for you, I'm glad that I did! ~ Smiling with you, dear Toe! ~ Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe--- I just read your second reply, "a penny?" Well actually, I always did consider the saying, "A penny for your thoughts!", to be under valuing the other person's thoughts. So, to be honest, I'd pay a lot more for your thoughts----especially if you were to put all your comedic genius in a book that I could purchase! ~ still smiling! ~ Linda |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How sweet! Toe will love this! Corinne |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My book's on sale at Walmart, It's a penny for all my thoughts You really get what ya pay for, And one cent is all it costs. There is another version, It's written by Balladeer, It's called "Equate Poetry Offerings" "Compare to Toerag's Rear" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, those toes are ticklish, aren't they? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Corinne--- Toe was kind enough to email a "thank you" to me---and he does love it!----Whew! That's a relief! hehe Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe--- You absolutely crack me up! I'm sure your "deer" friend will find it amusing to be the butt of yet another one of your poems! hehe I'm so happy that I was able to put a smile on your face with this poem I wrote for you---you're always putting one on mine! Linda |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Again I want to thank all of you sweet people for the kind words and to the Angel that wrote this....I've never met a person here I've had any real trouble with, even with my terrible and sometimes offensive poems that are never meant to hurt or ridicule anyone...thanks again one and all..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kris--- "Let me entertain you, Let me make you smile..." ---That's my credo! So I'm pleased that I accomplished that! P.S. I always enjoy "reading your words" as well!!! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Midnitesun--- I suppose his "toes are ticklish"---but I can't say I know this from personal experience!!! tee-hee! Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - Toe is Toe, yet I've never met, but I have heard of he.... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
EA, Yup...he's that and more. I love my 'deer friend Toe, He is a so and so. But as to his assaults, Made on other's faults; It's all been done in jest, Because he loves us best! You can always depend upon Toe, Even when you're in a jam. And if you feel alone, He will send you spam. And if we stub our Toe, It's because he cannot see. After all he's in the dark, And that's no mystery. And if Toe seems like a hangnail, It's just because of pain. After all he's got feelings too, He shared in my own pain. Okay I'll quit it's out of control. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC--- I've never met him either--but I feel like I know him through his writing---witty, charming, caring and talented---and by all the wonderful responses he is receiving--he's loved and respected by others as well! ~ May you always have a song in your heart, dear troubador! ~ EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Larry C--- Golly gee! He is absolutely going to love this poem of yours! I certainly do! I have to admit, I'm thrilled that my little poem gave rise to so many wonderful tributes to Toe. These warm and loving responses will put a smile on his face as he gives each of us a smile! BTW--You're a sweetie yourself! EA |
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