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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-27 12:25 PM



ODE TO TOE
by
Earth Angel
~~~~~~~

Oh, once upon a time,
Across an azure sea
There lived a princely rag,
His name was Toe, you see.

Each morning he would wrap himself,
In rags of rich, fine linen,
Half his day was as a saint,
--the other half was sinnin'!

Who is this man of witty charm,
Whose horn is full of plenty,
Methinks he is a mystery man,
Whose thoughts I'd give a penny!

~~~~~~~


[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-27-2002 06:58 PM).]

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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2002-09-27 12:40 PM


Earth Angel, I love this and will be watching for more.  I think he likes to stir the pot.  ME
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2 posted 2002-09-27 12:44 PM


No mystery about it... he's one of this world's very finest. *G*

This is delightful, EA...

Saint or sinner... or Bal's favorite pest
One thing is clear... sweet Toe's the best!


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-27 01:01 PM


ME---

I agree with you, Mother--- "I think he likes to stir the pot"!!!

And as Martha Stewart often says...."and that's a good thing!"

~ May you send beautiful weather all around the world---you have the power! hehe ~

EA

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4 posted 2002-09-27 01:04 PM


Suthern--

Looks like you are definitely on the list of Toe's fans! Thank you for the "delightful" reply.  It was easy to write this poem considering the subject matter! hehe

Linda

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5 posted 2002-09-27 01:04 PM


So curious you are of Toe I see
A mystery man of cheer
Painting smiles upon our face
Making fun of our friend ‘deer

That’s his goal in life you know
This I’ve recently learned
Badgering words of play
As poor ol’ ‘deer gets burned

All good fun and silliness
Back and forth they bout
Toe & “deer go round and round
Spreading laughter throughout

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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6 posted 2002-09-27 01:08 PM




[This message has been edited by suthern (09-27-2002 04:43 PM).]

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-09-27 01:10 PM


Irie---

That was a fantastic poem you just wrote. I love it---Toe will surely love it as well. That was so sweet of you to reply this way.

~ smiles to you this fine fall day ~

Linda

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8 posted 2002-09-27 01:18 PM


There once was a man we called Toerag
Whose quips got our Deer in a deep quag
Sometimes Balladeer got him back
They were evenly matched it's a fact
Enter LongJhn the third scalawag!!

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9 posted 2002-09-27 01:21 PM


Nan

Ah, now I've got it, there are THREE 'Muck'ateers! haha

~ Smiling right along with you! ~

Linda

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10 posted 2002-09-27 01:34 PM


Funny stuff here EA!
Watch out cause that Toe will get you back!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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11 posted 2002-09-27 01:38 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, Toerag is definitely a mystery but delight to us all, I love it, he will love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-09-27 02:00 PM


Enchantress---

If I was going to write about Toe, I knew I had to make it "funny"! Thanx!

Is it raining in your neck of the woods? It is here and I love it. A peaceful, reflective day---in between clients!

Have a great day!
Linda

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13 posted 2002-09-27 02:09 PM


Noah---

Is he a man of mystery?---or is he really the Man of La Mancha or the man-in-the-moon or a man-of-war or Suthern's main man or .......???

Hm! Don't know!---I guess he is indeed, a man of mystery afterall! hehe

~ smiles ~
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-27-2002 02:13 PM).]

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14 posted 2002-09-27 02:22 PM


A saint?....Mystery man?.....Ya make me sound like an angelic James Bond?....LOL....Like I could be "lifted up by Angel's Wings"....thank you so much for the very sweet poem gal...you are a sweetie!!! And thank you all for the kind responses to this nice poem.....
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15 posted 2002-09-27 02:23 PM


A penny?....
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16 posted 2002-09-27 02:33 PM


Irie...I truly love my bud Balladeer and LongJohn too....though he doesn't come play often anymore....and yes....if I can create at least a slight smile...I feel honored...thanks for the sweet write.
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17 posted 2002-09-27 02:36 PM


Linda, a truly entertaining piece!! I always enjoy reading your words!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2002-09-27 02:37 PM


Toe---

An "Angelic James Bond" you say?!?---I'm intrigued! tehe

It was with trepidation that I posted this poem, but now that it appears to have met with your approval, and given all the wonderful responses it got for you, I'm glad that I did!

~  Smiling with you, dear Toe!  ~

Linda

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19 posted 2002-09-27 03:13 PM


Toe---

I just read your second reply, "a penny?"

Well actually, I always did consider  the saying, "A penny for your thoughts!", to be  under valuing the other person's thoughts. So, to be honest, I'd pay a lot more for your thoughts----especially if you were to put all your comedic genius in a book that I could purchase!

~ still smiling! ~

Linda

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20 posted 2002-09-27 03:51 PM


How sweet! Toe will love this!

Corinne

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21 posted 2002-09-27 04:06 PM


My book's on sale at Walmart,
It's a penny for all my thoughts
You really get what ya pay for,
And one cent is all it costs.

There is another version,
It's written by Balladeer,
It's called "Equate Poetry Offerings"
"Compare to Toerag's Rear"

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22 posted 2002-09-27 04:14 PM


LOL, those toes are ticklish, aren't they?
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23 posted 2002-09-27 04:29 PM


Corinne---

Toe was kind enough to email a "thank you" to  me---and he does love it!----Whew! That's a relief! hehe

Linda

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24 posted 2002-09-27 04:33 PM


Toe---

You absolutely crack me up! I'm sure your "deer" friend will find it amusing to be the butt of yet another one of your poems! hehe

I'm so happy that I was able to put a smile on your face with this poem I wrote for you---you're always putting one on mine!

Linda

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25 posted 2002-09-27 05:56 PM


Again I want to thank all of you sweet people for the kind words and to the Angel that wrote this....I've never met a person here I've had any real trouble with, even with my terrible and sometimes offensive poems that are never meant to hurt or ridicule anyone...thanks again one and all.....
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26 posted 2002-09-27 07:10 PM


Kris---

"Let me entertain you,
Let me make you smile..."

---That's my credo! So I'm pleased that I accomplished that!

P.S. I always enjoy "reading your words" as well!!!

Linda

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27 posted 2002-09-27 07:11 PM


Midnitesun---

I suppose his "toes are ticklish"---but I can't say I know this from personal experience!!!  tee-hee!

Linda

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28 posted 2002-09-28 12:26 PM


Earth Angel - Toe is Toe, yet I've never met, but I have heard of he....

BC

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29 posted 2002-09-28 01:35 AM


EA,
Yup...he's that and more.

I love my 'deer friend Toe,
He is a so and so.
But as to his assaults,
Made on other's faults;
It's all been done in jest,
Because he loves us best!

You can always depend upon Toe,
Even when you're in a jam.
And if you feel alone,
He will send you spam.

And if we stub our Toe,
It's because he cannot see.
After all he's in the dark,
And that's no mystery.

And if Toe seems like a hangnail,
It's just because of pain.
After all he's got feelings too,
He shared in my own pain.

Okay I'll quit it's out of control.

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30 posted 2002-09-28 10:52 AM


BC---

I've never met him either--but I feel like I know him through his writing---witty, charming, caring and talented---and by all the wonderful responses he is receiving--he's loved and respected by others as well!

~ May you always have a song in your heart, dear troubador! ~

EA

Earth Angel
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31 posted 2002-09-28 10:58 AM


Larry C---

Golly gee! He is absolutely going to love this poem of yours! I certainly do! I have to admit, I'm thrilled that my little poem gave rise to so many wonderful tributes to Toe. These warm and loving responses will put a smile on his face as he gives each of us a smile!

BTW--You're a sweetie yourself!

EA

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