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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Lost and lonely I have been deep inside a drinkers skin To arise once and fall again Head in a hash pipe you cannot win Was pulled aloft by a loving heart Only to see it all fall apart To loneliness again I was sure to start But instead I learned anew the poets art Lost I am yet at times it seems Deep within a poets dreams Awakened I have after dispair has been tasted Realizing that only love never expressed gets wasted "If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"only love never expressed gets wasted" What a wonderful line!!! It ends this piece so VERY well!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is really beautiful. Enjoyed this very much. :-) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Lost I am yet at times it seems Deep within a poets dreams Awakened I have after dispair has been tasted Realizing that only love never expressed gets wasted" i still am wondering myself if love not expressed is wasted...it has inspired me...to think another direction...helen |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good!! You expressed yourself very well. I believe that whatever our emotions are at any given time is the inspiration we get to put our words forth....in whatever way we might put them forth at the time. Does that make sense?!? Best wishes, Ethel....garysgirl |
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