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just a little inconvenienced
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just a little inconvenienced |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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the tram came dancing a few minutes later than yesterday and certainly more filled carrying scores of humans with exasperated looks like hordes of worker bees buzzing their busy lives away were they vexed because they were all collectively late may be because there were simply too many of them why can’t they all be somewhere else was the singular polarized thought that tore through my mind but that thought was quickly drowned by a sweet lilac scent that flew my way making my head turn and my eyes ogle at a bright face and refreshing eyes that’s when she smiled probably provoked by my stare she asked ‘is all well?’ sheepishly I answered ‘I’m fine. thank you.' 'just a little inconvenienced’  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We never do tell the whole truth when beauty smacks us in the face, do we?  Enjoyed the read, Sudhir! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sudhir, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, beauty is so hard to describe and it can always overwhelm us so then we don't know what we are saying! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! Sudhir...you brought this picture to life. Fantastic imagery contained in this piece. Much enjoyed my friend. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Wonderful, Sudhir!! People worry too much about the things they can't change. It's nice to see that someone can make light of such an inconvenience!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this one a lot Sudhir...very nice...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Many thanks... I am glad that you all enjoyed this one... The tram ride today was eventless... nothing to write about...  Regards, Sudhir |
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