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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-23 11:30 PM


(This is for my love Joanna, who I love with all my heart! )



Wedding Bell Jingle
By: Noah Eaton
9/23/02

Speaking softly
In dolphin grammar
Sipping down lemonade anaphora
With key lime pie pleasure
And I cry looking
At you...

Double rainbows arch
Reflecting from your veil of stars
You're in your clair de lune toe shoes
With 18 Yellow Roses playing on in your heart
And I cry looking
At you...

Looking deep into you...
Looking deep into you...

Through your sigh
I hear "Saturday in the Park" crooning
Through your pearl tears
I see Venice on a summer evening
And I cry looking
At you...

And you spin in circles like a prom queen
You spin in circles like a prom queen...

Looking deep into you...
Looking deep into you...
I feel the sunrise speak
Looking deep into you...

So many new nights to fathom
So many new days to share with you
There's nothing more we need
There's nothing we can afford to lose...

And you spin in circles like a prom queen
You spin in circles like a prom queen...

Looking deep into you...
Looking deep into you...
I feel the sunrise speak
Looking deep into you...

Sweet love...
Sweet love...
Sweet love...
Let's make this night our honeymoon...

Looking deep into you...
Looking deep into you...
I feel the sunrise speak
Looking deep into you...

Scoop your spoon into the heavens
Lick these marshmallow sundaes
With me and the diamond doves
That fly through the bay window of your dreams...

Looking deep into you...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-23-2002 11:31 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-23 11:31 PM


This is beautiful Noah. One day this will be me and Liam too. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
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2 posted 2002-09-23 11:34 PM


Awwww..     I bet she feels so lucky.  What a lovely way to express your love.  Wonderful poem Noah.  
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-24 04:19 PM



You have written so many beautiful love poems for your lovely Joanna. This one is no exception.

Linda

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4 posted 2002-09-24 04:25 PM


I decided to drop in and look what I came across! A gorgeous, emotion-filled, pefectly painted poem for me
I'm really really sorry that I haven't been here lately to read all the poems you've written for me but I will do a search and read each one. Thank you hunnie, sugar plum, apple of my eye. heheheh back up to the top this goes because it is B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!

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5 posted 2002-09-24 04:30 PM


Noah, you are a hopeless ramantic!! Joanna is indeed very luck, my friend!!!!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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6 posted 2002-09-24 05:17 PM


enjoy your read!!!!!!!
Martie
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7 posted 2002-09-24 05:38 PM


Beautiful, Noah!  And look how happy you made her!  
NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-09-24 07:43 PM


Oh Noah, this is so beautiful and loving. And the best of it is that your beloved Joanna got to read it and comment on it.

You two are just so darn cute together.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-09-24 09:10 PM


Noah - you have it really bad you do. But that's ok, it's great to love someone like you both do...

BC

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10 posted 2002-09-24 09:16 PM


Just lovely Noah - and she liked it soooo much!!! hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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11 posted 2002-09-27 09:54 PM


awwwwww, love this, so sweet!

SS

SimplyGold
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12 posted 2002-09-27 10:12 PM


Noah,

You are truly beautiful. Lucky Joanna, Lucky Noah.

Thanks for sharing your dreams and passions.



SimplyGold

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-09-30 01:14 AM


Very romantic...made me think of a line from a movie I shall not name...It went something like this..."Why do you want to marry me.  So I can kiss you anytime I want."  Hope you can kiss your sweetheart anytime you want...James
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2002-09-30 03:54 AM


This is splendidly written...

Noah, you are a master of romantic poetry...

regards,
sudhir

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