Open Poetry #22 |
Wedding Bell Jingle |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is for my love Joanna, who I love with all my heart! ) Wedding Bell Jingle By: Noah Eaton 9/23/02 Speaking softly In dolphin grammar Sipping down lemonade anaphora With key lime pie pleasure And I cry looking At you... Double rainbows arch Reflecting from your veil of stars You're in your clair de lune toe shoes With 18 Yellow Roses playing on in your heart And I cry looking At you... Looking deep into you... Looking deep into you... Through your sigh I hear "Saturday in the Park" crooning Through your pearl tears I see Venice on a summer evening And I cry looking At you... And you spin in circles like a prom queen You spin in circles like a prom queen... Looking deep into you... Looking deep into you... I feel the sunrise speak Looking deep into you... So many new nights to fathom So many new days to share with you There's nothing more we need There's nothing we can afford to lose... And you spin in circles like a prom queen You spin in circles like a prom queen... Looking deep into you... Looking deep into you... I feel the sunrise speak Looking deep into you... Sweet love... Sweet love... Sweet love... Let's make this night our honeymoon... Looking deep into you... Looking deep into you... I feel the sunrise speak Looking deep into you... Scoop your spoon into the heavens Lick these marshmallow sundaes With me and the diamond doves That fly through the bay window of your dreams... Looking deep into you... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-23-2002 11:31 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful Noah. One day this will be me and Liam too. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Awwww.. I bet she feels so lucky. What a lovely way to express your love. Wonderful poem Noah. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have written so many beautiful love poems for your lovely Joanna. This one is no exception. Linda |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I decided to drop in and look what I came across! A gorgeous, emotion-filled, pefectly painted poem for me I'm really really sorry that I haven't been here lately to read all the poems you've written for me but I will do a search and read each one. Thank you hunnie, sugar plum, apple of my eye. heheheh back up to the top this goes because it is B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Noah, you are a hopeless ramantic!! Joanna is indeed very luck, my friend!!!!!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read!!!!!!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, Noah! And look how happy you made her! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Noah, this is so beautiful and loving. And the best of it is that your beloved Joanna got to read it and comment on it. You two are just so darn cute together. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you have it really bad you do. But that's ok, it's great to love someone like you both do... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely Noah - and she liked it soooo much!!! hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awwwwww, love this, so sweet! SS |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Noah, You are truly beautiful. Lucky Joanna, Lucky Noah. Thanks for sharing your dreams and passions. SimplyGold |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very romantic...made me think of a line from a movie I shall not name...It went something like this..."Why do you want to marry me. So I can kiss you anytime I want." Hope you can kiss your sweetheart anytime you want...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is splendidly written... Noah, you are a master of romantic poetry... regards, sudhir |
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