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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648


0 posted 2002-09-27 04:11 AM



You had no right to barge right in
dam it!
You had no right to barge
I tellya!


Howlin dawgs all ova the place!
Two clock in damornin!

Yer a disgrace!

and

Look at yer face ya good fer nothin!

Bargin in this time damornin!

Should be shamed!

Dag nabit!

Should be shamed!

And what's this hea ya got in yer pocket...

Drugs?

I been tellinya!
Haven't I been tellinya?
But ya don't listen do ya!

Two oclock in damornin willya!
Two oclock in da mornin--

Huh?

We'll see about that!
We'll just see about that!


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Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-09-27 07:59 AM


Interesting write.....it's kinda like what a fish says when he swims into a concrete wall......DAM!
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2002-09-27 02:45 PM


Well looks like Daisy Duke has been caught red handed

sorry couldn't resist, an enjoyable read.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

[This message has been edited by brian madden (09-28-2002 07:21 AM).]

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