Open Poetry #22 |
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Sissy Fuss ---- bSen squirrel-blaze co-challenge |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa ![]() |
slap of bird wing to face the wait of bolder re-places shoulder wet push up a groan upset a moan tainted tense-sweat fight it all away exert inertia subvert a vertical clime with hot windywords in other wards-- a chamois charlatan shared a ton removed objected bipedaled pebble reflecting crested insights the tiny stone is steeped in mouth reaping mineral bathos gnosis in scoliosis bent with torrential scree of energy landslide's potential-- loosened erode back down the still side |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm not sure I understood this one. I did get this visual of a tiny Atlas-strength ant--onward, upward, one step at a time... Again...not sure about the intent, but don't mind me...not sure about much tonight. But I LIKE the idea of an Atlas Ant. *smile* |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Karen? you have WAY too much on your plate now to be wondering what this crap means peace to you, sweetheart try to get some sleep ok? love you |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Are you talking about mercury is retrograde, here? As in, Hg within thermometers and not the planet. If so, lol, I made the same mistake originally. Loved this, bri. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
*snorting coffee out the nose* OW! no Mike, I'm laughing WITH you ![]() seriously though that challenge was for Karen this was the Go Write Something challenge that you guys laid on me and my lazy butt thanks you Burning Sinus |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Aaaah, THAT challenge. Well met. ![]() |
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