Open Poetry #22 |
Sissy Fuss ---- bSen squirrel-blaze co-challenge |
brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
slap of bird wing to face the wait of bolder re-places shoulder wet push up a groan upset a moan tainted tense-sweat fight it all away exert inertia subvert a vertical clime with hot windywords in other wards-- a chamois charlatan shared a ton removed objected bipedaled pebble reflecting crested insights the tiny stone is steeped in mouth reaping mineral bathos gnosis in scoliosis bent with torrential scree of energy landslide's potential-- loosened erode back down the still side |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm not sure I understood this one. I did get this visual of a tiny Atlas-strength ant--onward, upward, one step at a time... Again...not sure about the intent, but don't mind me...not sure about much tonight. But I LIKE the idea of an Atlas Ant. *smile* |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Karen? you have WAY too much on your plate now to be wondering what this crap means peace to you, sweetheart try to get some sleep ok? love you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Are you talking about mercury is retrograde, here? As in, Hg within thermometers and not the planet. If so, lol, I made the same mistake originally. Loved this, bri. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
*snorting coffee out the nose* OW! no Mike, I'm laughing WITH you seriously though that challenge was for Karen this was the Go Write Something challenge that you guys laid on me and my lazy butt thanks you Burning Sinus |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Aaaah, THAT challenge. Well met. |
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