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Kielo
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0 posted 2002-09-27 01:51 AM


Pain.
Emotional pain,
physical pain,
it matters not.
Pain is my lot in life.
I deserve it,
for I am lesser than others.

Pain.
In pain,
I am content.


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This is more my style. I prefer it by far to my last submission in this forum. However, that is merely my own opinion. Please, feel free to disagree with me. Life is more interesting that way.

Kielo

[This message has been edited by Kielo (09-27-2002 07:06 PM).]

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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2002-09-27 02:07 AM


No one should feel lesser than others and I am sorry you feel this way.  We all have something to contribute to life no matter which walk of life we come from.  I wish you well.  I hope your pain eases.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-27 11:40 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kielo, I agree 110% with Sue, we are all connected together in the spirit of life, therefore He loves all of us the same way compassionately and has  a plan for us all. You are a blessed person and though you may have felt much pain, you only grow stronger and have become the loving compassionate person you are blessed to be from it! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kielo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins
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3 posted 2002-09-27 11:48 AM


I'm sending you a hug!!! Nice write too!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-09-27 07:02 PM


I like the single-minded of this, Kielo.

But go back and check out The lover and the woman.

I'm not saying always go for the language of romance.

But go for depth.
(just don't disappear up yourself,
like I occasionally do )

Mike

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