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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Intangible entity slips in, slips out Noticed & not- a creaking door on a breeze Shadows, creeping crawling Shiver across your bones Slips in, slips out Ever watching, ever reading Your eyes, Your mouth, Your heart, Your breath... Is it stale of death? Is it pale of light Tensions? emotions? Spells and potions? Divine, awe-inspiring? Life, never tiring? So near, so near Ever listening, ever whispering Ever empathetic, ever wishing... Intangible entity slips in, slips out Noticed & not, A creaking door on the breeze Exhale, It's me... ~Tier 9/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
OOH!!!!Nicely done!!! I can feel the chill brushing my skin already!  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's not you that worries me, Tier. It's that ghost bleeding out of its eyes behind you!  |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The breath of love, of life, of being. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
*shiver* damn! so good |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sometimes I feel like that. Pinching yourself really works! This was superbly done! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tiersdin, I love this, sweet friend, I know this feeling so well and it too creeps me out but then I just smile when its just my kitty or a loved one! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Had me goin there, thought it was some hell-spawned demon thing that you were writi |
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