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Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-09-26 06:42 PM

Just over the fence
Upon the far mountain's peak
My dreams wait for me

I often forget which is which.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-09-26 07:29 PM

Hi Kris...
I love these as well and never can remember the rules for them
or which is which either.
I'm sure someone will come along and set us straight.

This one is very beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-09-26 07:30 PM

very cool.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-09-26 07:32 PM

enjoy

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-09-26 07:39 PM

Krishankins - I'm not sure either, but it's a fine poem...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-09-26 07:50 PM

Admiring the comparison here Chris...so you!
ThisDiamond

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-09-26 07:51 PM

Sen Sen Senryu....
Senryu deals with everything in a 5-7-5 syllable count that has nothing to do with nature...

Haiku is strictly nature...no human reference or material reference should be made...

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

7 posted 2002-09-26 07:54 PM

Thanks Sunshine. I thought it went that way, but you know how guys are about asking for directions!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-09-26 08:50 PM

(smiles) Oh Kristopher, I love this, sweet friend, it is funny too and sometimes I get senryus and haikus mixed up too, but this is a gorgeous senryu! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-09-26 08:53 PM

Softly floating Senyru.
Sandra

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