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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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You, your breath its chill upon my spine I feel your warmth You, your smile its light of days that shine I follow your guide You, your eyes they are stars that fill this empty heart I wish upon each as one You, as only you can be from the start I, within your lasting grasp Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely. A wonderful write, and a soft read. Nicely done! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very well expressed Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very good, enjoyable read, it flows smoothly. Thanks for sharing  |
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