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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-09-24 07:39 AM


Hello

Hello my friends just passing bye
Today I am a butterfly.
I’m looking for a nectars Isle
To land upon and stay awhile

I’ve sown myself a pair of wings
Of guiles and wiles and other things
And taken me some seeds of joy
To plant the earth in redeploys

On these I’ll plant some daffodils
With hews of other colored frills.
And water then with kindest care
To make them flower nice and fair.

And then I’ll dream of kingdoms come
And beat upon my kettledrum
And beat the beat for joy to grow
To make a field of joy to sew

And On this field of happenstance
I’ll dance and dance and dance and dance.



© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2002-09-24 07:41 AM


Flutterby anytime
I always enjoy your rhyme

Gloom

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-24 08:12 AM


Hello to you too, Mr. T! May I have the next dance?

Reading this poem was such a delightful way for me to start my day! Thank you!

~ May your wings transport you to magical kingdoms yet to be discovered! ~

EA

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3 posted 2002-09-24 08:15 AM




(smiles) And hello to you too, kind sir! (smiles) My, what wonderful and spacious visions you always weave for us all off of butterfly wings, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! Goo day to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-09-24 08:21 AM


Professor Gloom
Thank you and I did flutter bye.

Earth Angel
They do and you may, have a good one.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-09-24 08:25 AM


Noah,
Well if your going to have spacious visions
you might as well have good ones. LOL

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-09-24 09:12 AM


How lovely and lyrical Sy!
May I have the next waltz?
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2002-09-24 09:30 AM


Good Morning sweet man ~~ what a glorious way to start my day. There is still nectar in my garden if you'd like to fly by and visit for a bit.

Thank you for bringing a lighthearted mood to my morning.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-09-24 09:48 AM




So in your purple iridisce
is how we love to see you best
now take to wing and sow your dreams
and fling your sing on golden beams

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-09-24 10:02 AM


Enchantress
Yes you may, thank you dear.

Marti
Thank you and hugs back.

Sunshine
Thank you sweet, beautiful pictures and reply

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10 posted 2002-09-24 10:14 AM


Seymour - oh, lovely!! Can I powder my wings and join you? Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Krishankins
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11 posted 2002-09-24 10:16 AM


Wonderfully done! It makes me smile to see people write of such colorful things! Thank you!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-09-24 11:27 AM


Chris,
Why of course my dear and thanks for the read

Krishankins
So glad you enjoyed, thank you.

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13 posted 2002-09-24 11:09 PM


May I flutter with you a while,
Seymor Tabin you make me smile~


Just when I think you have done the most beautiful one, you up and do another!  Oh did the visions in my mind of this one brighen this night.

God Bless
    
Sharon  

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14 posted 2002-09-24 11:14 PM


Hitting the happy juice a little tonight, Sy?
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-09-25 07:32 AM


Sharon
A smile, is a smile, is a smile.

Hey Mike you ought to know, you brought it over. LOL

Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 2002-09-25 08:44 PM


Hey guys, can I have some of that?
Liz

Beautiful poem, Sy

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-09-25 10:49 PM


Elizabeth,
You can have anything we got, LOL thank you darling for the read and nice comment.

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