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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-25 11:22 PM



It has begun
the dance of cloud with moon.
Shadow across, upon.
Surreal they'll dance till dawn.

WhiteRose


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-25-2002 11:38 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-25 11:23 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2002-09-25 11:33 PM


... and the music is out of this world!!
    
     Its like a tease to the senses when
     there is not a cloud in the night sky.

     Nice work!!

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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Pennsylvania
3 posted 2002-09-25 11:59 PM


Oh this is lovely.  Thanks for sharing it with us.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-09-26 11:07 AM


Your poem is "surreal" as well. Lovely and enchanting!

~ May your words continue to "dance" on these sky-blue pages! ~

Linda

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