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Tortured Mermaid
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Tortured Mermaid |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
She swims the depths of blue singing always, singing her voice, soft & persuasive melodiously insistent knows someone will hear someone always hears... Will this heart too crash upon the shore of her passion? ~Tier 8/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (08-18-2002 09:17 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tier~This is very lovely... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you Enchantress... *hugs back* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Will this heart too crash upon the shore of her passion? Quite possibly, tiersdin. and quite a melancholic piece, I enjoyed it very much. Maree  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So well written of the lonely sea and the song of the mermaid. ThisDiamond |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Dark Angel and This Diamond. I'm glad that you enjoyed! *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps. . . if the chains are there. . . welcome back my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tiersdin, this is so sadly touching, may this mermaid be free and swimming in ecstasy as she deserves too and as all other dreamers do! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
Hello, Very much enjoyed this... Looking forward to more... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Will this heart too crash upon the shore of her passion? Great verse, Tier! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes driftwoodbrian I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Arrrgh, I feel all over the place this morning. But the sea, even when it's drowning, always offers the rhythm of its heart to soothe. Ooo, poem idea! m. |
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