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The End of it All
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The End of it All |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
I’ll do it You can’t stop me I’m going to end my pain I’m going to end my torment It’s all going away This time I lay my head down Knowing it will all go away This is my escape My way to end the torture It is the end of it all Until day breaks yet again |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow, you had me worried there...may day keep breaking! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sleep a practice of death, but tomorrow is, well, another day. Enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I wish I could sleep through some things. I really like the irony in this! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You pulled this one out of the fieriest nightmare, didn't you...? Twist us again... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maverick Wolf It all goes through the hour glass. Enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I thought, for just a sec. that I was gonna have to call 911....but, what you write is true...sometimes, sleep is all we feel we have to take away pain or anxiety of a moment that really bears hard down upon us.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Intriguing write, Maverick Wolf. Enjoyed this piece. It seems once one has made up their mind about something nothing you could ever do or say could change it. Just some thoughts. All writing comes |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whew !! Frightened me for a second. Well done and...sweet dreams. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..as my sister Nightshade said... sweet dreams... Had me scared for a minute there. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, you too startled me and sent a siver up my spine but I'm glad in the end it all settled down, you always know how to grab everyone with words, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-18-2002 11:27 PM).] |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Cheap shot I have to say. Way to keep it safe with the last line... or at least change it enough so it doesn't get thrown off the forums? "See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm always stopped. My brain won't shut down...funny how we hate to sleep as kids, then as adults we cherish it. Anyhow, nice one. |
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