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iluvhellokitty21
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0 posted 2002-09-25 11:51 AM


a blue light shines dimly

across the faces of the three men


who sit and strum at their acoustic guitars


my leg brushes against yours


as we listen to their smooth voices


they sing of all the things I feel for you


the things I wish I could make you understand


their voices carry me beyond the small cafe


into memories of us


memories of all you mean to me


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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-25 11:52 AM


This is beautiful. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-09-25 12:00 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Loved your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Make yourself at home, read, comment and..
most of all...enjoy yourself.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-09-25 12:02 PM



Welcome to Passions!  Emotional poetry is a good thing   Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Magician
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4 posted 2002-09-25 01:41 PM


Loved your first post, very striking visually. Says a lot without actually saying it, if that makes sense.

BTW, what is hello kitty?? *S*

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-25 01:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous and lovely debut, yay, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

iluvhellokitty21
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since 2002-09-24
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USA
6 posted 2002-09-25 04:06 PM


For all those who are wondering... and for magician who asked specifically... Hello Kitty is a cartoon character made in Japan in the 1970s.  She is very popular here in the US (you can find almost anything with her little icon on it).  I am a big fan.  Check her out www.sanrio.com

Also... THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENTS!  YOU ARE ALL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET.
I look forward to being involved in this forum.

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