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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-09-25 12:52 PM


Orchids strewn upon the canvas
Blending clouds with cream
Splendor drapes angelic dew
Again, you've found my dreams

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
secretlife
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1 posted 2002-09-25 02:10 AM


I love ur piece..
Nice thoughts...
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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2 posted 2002-09-25 02:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you always create the most gorgeous and breathtaking visions and thoughts in such few words, sweet friend, may love always sing in an angelic symphony to your heart, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-09-25 03:40 PM


Very nice thoughts and images here Kris!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-09-25 03:40 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

VAS
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5 posted 2002-09-26 11:35 AM


simply tender, lovely

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Toerag
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6 posted 2002-09-26 12:08 PM


Well Kris...when I first saw the title I was gonna respond to go ask your mother about the birds and bees.....but...instead I'll just say...good write!!
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-09-26 12:59 PM


In this tiny little poem you managed to mention several of my favorite things:

orchids, canvas, clouds, cream, angels, dew, dreams, grapes---whoops, I see you wrote "drapes"! Oh, well, 7 out of 8 ain't half bad! tehe

~ smiling with you as always ~

Linda

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8 posted 2002-09-26 11:49 PM


Hello Kris

You never cease to amaze me with how much impact you can have with so few words.  I love this one.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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