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vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-09-24 05:51 PM


Here Iam again
With you holding my hand
Again
Stars so bright
Tonight
You and I
To be here again
With you
Together we are cleared
of misconceptions
Forgiven of abandoment
Now I don't need
A reason to believe
Because You exceed deep into me
Again and again
On and on
Over and over again
Like an acrobat
hanging from a high wire
above my dreams tonight
yet
again and again
Hanging on high
memories left apart
And here again
Wanting to know
How we are meant to be
but now i feel alright
tonight
just as long as
here Iam with you
we can trade judgement
For justice
I give you all the stars
I give you all my love and heart
tonight
with the heavens
we will make a fortune
tonight
Again and again
you carry leeward
to the heavens
again and again
we are falling
all over again
Tonight

I like to thank my friend Noah
Sharing this wonderfull poem we ever create it together      thanks  



[This message has been edited by vandana (09-24-2002 05:54 PM).]

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-24 05:59 PM


Awesome duet Vanada and Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-09-24 06:00 PM


Fantastic...James
ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2002-09-24 06:07 PM


Awesome.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-09-24 07:41 PM


Great job you two; I enjoyed this very much.

Hugs, Marti


Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2002-09-24 07:59 PM



You wrote as one! Wonderful collaboration!

Linda

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