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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-09-24 05:37 PM

My girl aint much to look at,
She's not the type that will,
Win a beauty pageant,
Her looks just would not thrill.

Her parents are both moonshiners,
They live up on the hill,
And though she ain't that pretty,
Yanno I love her "still"

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-09-24 05:47 PM

I bet you're still drinking in her charms!
tehe

Linda

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2002-09-24 05:58 PM

Drowning in her attributes ya mean?....

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2002-09-24 06:29 PM

cool read. Atleast you see the beauty in her, that is what most is important.

[This message has been edited by Miah (09-24-2002 06:30 PM).]

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-09-24 06:52 PM

Well I've got one comment in me before I will get locked out again for a time and I picked this literary masterpiece to comment on. My dear Toe, you've no idea how much this laugh was needed today. And laugh I did, with gusto even.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-09-24 06:54 PM

Awesome read

Cold hands means a warm heart

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-09-24 07:36 PM

Toe, such giggles from this. Thanks so much....

Beauty ain't everything....hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-09-24 08:44 PM

lots of hugs for the absolutely grand
Mr.Toe

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-09-24 08:47 PM

(smiles) Oh Toerag, this is so beautiful, yes, it is the inner beauty that matters most and that is where true love always beats! (sigh) This is sensitive and lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-09-24 08:55 PM

Toerag - is that the one from West Virginny?????

BC

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2002-09-25 09:15 AM

After reading the first verse, I was absolutely sure... and thrilled to my very soul... that I'd at last won your heart... cause you described me so well!!!! LOL Unfortunately, I don't have a still to offer you... will a cold Fosters do? *G*

I love this, sweets... and thank you for the smiles to start my day. *S*

Paddy
Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 52
Straya

11 posted 2002-09-25 09:26 AM

This reminds me of a song, which also reminds me of my age.

"If you want to be happy for the rest of your life
Never make a pretty woman your wife
For from my personal point of view
Get another girl to marry you"

Sorry, I have absolutely no idea of the artist so cannot give credit.

I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?”

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

12 posted 2002-09-25 09:31 AM

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (09-25-2002 12:59 PM).]

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

13 posted 2002-09-25 12:55 PM

No gal would be much to look at that you could snag, retard (except Suthern Gal but she's suffering from temporary insanity).

Rumor has it you're so ugly your dog closes his eyes when he humps your leg....

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (09-25-2002 12:55 PM).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

14 posted 2002-09-25 08:50 PM

Toe, what can I say? I LOVE IT!

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

15 posted 2002-09-25 09:05 PM

Now I'm really confused. The girl I know is absolutely beautiful. I know cause I saw her picture. And I also saw your picture! hehe reminded me of a swamp dog. Ugliest hound this side of the Mississippi. But, I still love ya Toe.
Suthern, you angel, did I get him back , or what?
Hey, men, better treat your women right!
LOve ya Ruth and Toe. You're such good sports!
Liz

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

16 posted 2002-09-26 07:41 AM

Bark, Growl, wagging tail, sitting up, begging, trying to shake, rolling over, (most wish I was rolling over playing dead, the "Gloomy" ones anyway....

When I was just a little pup, I asked my mother, what will I be? Will I be Shepard, will I be basset, here's what she said to me: You ain't nuthin' but a hound dog...

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