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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-09-24 01:02 AM

With gentle caress
You sway the surface of me
From within my soul

in contrast to my post "To Begin, Again"

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (09-24-2002 10:20 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-09-24 02:16 AM

Love is a contast that takes hold and lets go~ I find a balance in the words you pen and the moving you impart between the two~

Justin D. Skize
New Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 4

2 posted 2002-09-24 02:24 AM

Kris...this is beautifully written.
I enjoyed it very much.
Justin

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

3 posted 2002-09-24 08:33 AM

So sensitive words from a sensitive person... I love your piece very much..

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-24 08:52 AM

Good morning Kris! I like your use of alliteration in this poem. The s's sound so sensual! tehe

(I believe this is a senryu, not a haiku. Haikus are on nature.)

This is an exquisite little gem!

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-24 09:08 AM

Beautifully done Kris...
~morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-09-24 10:30 AM

Kris, you have a talent for brevity...
and it is like a breath of fresh air...
thank you!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-24 11:01 AM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Kristopher, this is so beautiful, and I wish for this version of love to always fill your heart and give you great happiness forever! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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