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Open Poetry #22

If Only I Were Special

Doug Pretorius
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 81
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-09-23 07:38 PM

If Only I Were Special
September 23, 2002
Copyright 2002 Doug Pretorius

she wakes up in my dreams
and falls down my tears in streams
I can't separate what appears from what seems
am I supposed to know what that means?
she walks along the clouds
my head bobs up and down
in nightmares and visions aloud
I can't be heard above the crowd
she holds out her hand
to point out her special man
if only I were he
maybe then special I would be

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-23 08:09 PM

very lovely, but you are special.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-23 11:36 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-09-24 01:22 AM

Anyone that can write like this is indeed a very special person! nicely done!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-09-24 01:51 AM

she wakes up in my dreams
and falls down my tears in streams
I can't separate what appears from what seems

I liked those lines a lot~
but it hurts even more when you know the truth and it has nothing to do with what it seems. I've been caught in a catch 22...what can you do except grin and bare it and all that jazz!!! Nice poem~

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