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Fuji Junior Member
since 2002-09-23
Posts 26 |
What if I were to say I love you, With all the strength and breath in me? Would I be too bold? Would I come off too strong? Could I not just be...... passionate? What if I were to say I love you, With a whisper as soft as a breeze? Would I be shy? Would I seem too afraid to show my feelings? Could I not just be...... intimate? What if I did not say I love you? With silence I held closed my lips. Would I be selfish? Would I miss out on love by not sharing? Could I not just convey my feelings...... without words? ............. Because words alone can't express, how much I love you. (For Micaela) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely first post Fuji ... you've captured the hesitation and desire for expression of love nicely. Welcome to Passions!   Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fuji Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Joey, I think we all know this feeling ever so well and I wish for your Micaela to always know how much you love and care, this is a gorgeous debut, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Joey, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joey, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Fuji - This is a great place, and you'll make some wonderful friends here. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Settle in and enjoy yourself. Check your email for a special greeting...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I would think, that if Micaela were to read your wonderful words of love, she would definitely know how much she means to you! ~ smiles across the miles ~ Earth Angel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Could I not just be...... passionate?" Exactly. Welcome to these blue pages of passionate poetry. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Fuji - great first post!! Welcome to Passions - Enjoy yourself here. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Seems like you know how to get your point across, because sometimes, questions are JUST as important as the Answers... |
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Fuji Junior Member
since 2002-09-23
Posts 26 |
Thank you all. I just recently started to put my thoughts on paper. I wasn't sure if I could even write a poem worth sharing. Thanks for building up my confindence. Now if she could just feel the same as you all have about my words. [This message has been edited by Fuji (09-23-2002 11:14 AM).] |
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