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Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-09-22 09:40 PM

                                                     The ending of you

5 o’clock came and 6 o’clock too finally at seven I put away the stew

I cleaned up the kitchen and turned off the lights I went to my room and started to write.

I poured out my heart  this feverish trend, Oh how can I tell you my lover my friend.
There’s so many things I needed to say,  If only you would listen and not turn away

I cried and I cried long into the night , finally sleep let me forget this plight

Late morning came when I heard your car, I ran down the stairs out into the hall
I opened my arms wanting you there but you went to the kitchen and looked for some beer

I thought It was me, that your love went away
My hair ?
My face?
What is it I say?

I wanted to walk down by that one tree, where you carved my name for everyone to see
Things where different then, we were full of life
It wasn’t long after I became your wife

As days went by and years passed on, this feeling I had  went on and on.
You turned me away more often then not,  and things got to be were we fought and fought

It was December, a cold winter‘s eve, I handed you papers and started to leave
You said what is wrong? What’s the meaning of this?

I  started to shout shaking my fist,
And then I remembered I had a wish!

To stand on my feet and make my own niche
Never surrendering life so rich!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-09-22 10:08 PM

Very sad, Miah... but it sounds like you did the right thing...
At least you turned it into a lovely poem... and I hope things are working out for you.

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2002-09-22 10:14 PM

Miah, I am so sorry. This must not have been easy for you.

I hope your life is better now.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-22 10:21 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Miah, I know how hard it must have been for you to do this but I know it is only for the better and soon everything will be better again! (big hugggsssss) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much!n You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Miah, hank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2002-09-22 10:29 PM

Madame Chipmunk,

Thank you for your kind words, It was hard at the time, but time

seems to heal all wounds.

NewEnglandlazurlu,

Thank you so much for replying. My life is better now, I have a wonderful person with me who is my dream come true.

Mistletoe Angel,

I just want to say what a lovely heart you have. With that aside thank you so much for you kind words, they mean a great deal.

[This message has been edited by Miah (09-22-2002 10:30 PM).]

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