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Hapless
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since 2002-09-22
Posts 10
NY, USA

0 posted 2002-09-22 07:00 PM


My thoughts drift,
and you appear in my mind.
Always you.
Pervaiding the panorama of my pounding psychie.
Why won't you leave me alone?
Why can't I let you go?
Why do I love you?
I've got no strength to fight my feelings.
I want you.
I need you.
You pushed me away, I came back.
You push, I pull, and you always end up in my arms.
But where are you now?
Why don't you let me in?
Why can't I let you go?
Why do I need you so?
I long for the times,
when things between us,
wheren't between.


Thoughts?

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Denise
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1 posted 2002-09-22 07:13 PM


I like this, Hapless! Very good expression!
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-22 10:28 PM


Love the expression

Cold hands means a warm heart

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