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Shadow Waltz (Duet with CSKpoet)
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Shadow Waltz (Duet with CSKpoet) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Prisms of the night dance the flames as music fills the flowing breeze. Dancers floating light in flowing dare upon the wish, one moment seized. In gowns of soft and elegant lace the belles entrance their waiting mate. Rosette hues adorn the cheeks of face into late hours carriage waits. Eyes that spark within a glance Flirtatious looks as dancers pair Beguiling smiles and dreams perchance Of gents to kiss the lady fair Warm rose scent fills luminous night As dancers sway 'neath a warm glow moon Unspoken words, emotions take flight Heartbeats waltz to a lover's tune. Le Belle de Dame, Le Belle de Faire in step the sway of two as one. Le Belle de Dame, Le Belle de Faire as shadows prance the night yet young. [This message has been edited by Magnus (09-22-2002 04:59 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friends, I got the art of La Belle de Sans Merci reading this and watching the ballroom flourish with belles and gentleman under bright chandeliers, sweet friend, I love it, you two work wonderfully together, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Cheryl and Barry, thank you both for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-22-2002 04:58 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Congrads to both of you a nice job, enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Floated on the dance floor. ThisDiamond |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice you two!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thank you so much, Barry. It was a delight to write and blend words with you. aloha and hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is just beautiful! A beautiful waltz in 3/4 time! Wonderful wonderful! ~Hugs to you both!~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Barry and Cher, this is so good and I must say, you duet extremely well together. Hugs, Marti |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx to all and to Cher.. Thank You dear lady, it was a pleasure.. Any time you care to dance again...well, let me take some lessons first..OK? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - another great duet from you and a great poet... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely dance...lovely words and a perfect duet... ~ grins and hugs to both of youLyra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, you just had to know I'd be checking this duet out! Two wonderful poets such as yourselves, just had to make beautiful music together---and I was right!--you did!!! ~ hugs and smiles to you both! - Linda |
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han_tigger Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 50Thundersley, Essex, Uk |
I like this poem, but in some ways feel it may be better in free verse, if i was u i'd just give it a go and see what happens, u never know till u try. My poetry website is: http://www.geocities.com/han_tigger/HannahInglis.html Hannah. |
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