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Tim
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0 posted 2002-09-22 03:27 PM



Today it rained
and no one felt,
the splash of wet
upon their face.
No sound of rumble,
no flash of light,
nor torrents coursing
in headlong race.
No pavement wet,
no puddles splashed,
upon the ground
of damp no trace.
Today it rained
and no one knew,
that is except,
for me and you.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-09-22 03:47 PM



...me and you...

sometimes we have to look closely
to see the damp...

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-09-22 04:30 PM


How well said...
A sad expression set in mist...ThisDiamond

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-09-22 04:33 PM


Tim,
It happens, enjoyed the write.

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4 posted 2002-09-22 04:53 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Tim, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I wish for the sun to come and shine in your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-09-22 06:37 PM


Tim,
Romantic
and highly suspicious
of the observing capabilities
of others.

Then again,
in the flush of love,
it's only two that matters
(for a while).

Mike

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6 posted 2002-09-22 06:59 PM


Tim - wonderful write - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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